Tuesday, October 26, 2010

Vanish Inside

Slipping and skidding
  In a choking rain
 As I stepped out into the dizziness
  Of flinging caution away
 And the world was about to dissolve
 In churning colors and thickening beats
 I heard something I recognized
  A song projected upon your voice
   So many times over
  Now again it clears the sky
   Now again my breath returns
The clouds have edges now

2 comments:

  1. The pictures in this are so astounding Rachel!!! I love it. "The clouds have edges now." I understand exactly what you mean but I don't even know where to begin on how to explain it.

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  2. Rachel, I love the lines: "As I stepped out into the dizziness of flinging caution away"... Love it, I tell you.

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